Paragraphs

This section will contain many of  the brilliant paragraphs written by the boys in both fourth classes. The task for the paragraphs below was to uncover a new species while exploring and describe it in detail.

CRAZY CREATURES

My Crazy Creature by Eoin Canning.
"Aaghh" , its cold."Id better get back to the station". Kaw-Kaw !."What was that". Kaw-Kaw. "There it is again". "Id better go check whats happening".
"Hello" "Hello".Zoooooom! "Was that a penguin,with a mo-hawk". "Hey little buddy,how are you doing".  Zoooooooooom! "Well that's the last time ill see him". "Well I'd better get back to the station". "Tim! where were you man, I've been looking for you everywhere." "Sorry, there was this creature who had a mo-hawk and everything"." Yeah right". "I'm serious,he had a rainbow mow-hawk, ruby red eyes and had the ability to run very fast". "Yeah right"."Fine don't believe me, but you'll regret it!

Fang by Stephen Lammond
I looked outside my cabin window and saw a beautiful but strange fish. It had two giant fangs and big red eyes with blue pupils for it to see far away. It has a big tail so it can travel for ten kilometres per hour. It has razor sharp teeth like a pirhana and eats krill, crabs, fish and sometimes turtles. At first, it is friendly, but if you come close it gets frightened and becomes hostile. The skin of the Loompa is bright purple.

My Crazy New Species By David Reilly 4th Class
OMG. What is that? It must be a new species .Im gonna tell you about it.
It has padded feet.very good for swiming. It has thin,scaley leg and sucktion cups at the bottom of his feet. it has a furry body that is a dark red maroon type of colour with yellow spot inbetween the fur. It also has a wriggly tail that is also maroon. It has a dog shaped head with pointy ears. He also has deadly dark green cat eyes. The head is a very bright orange and it has a purple tongue. And he also has a unusual squeling bark. His diet plan is fish,meat almost anything he can find. He is one arms width tall an two metres long.I call him .  THE GRUMP!!!!!!!! I know it is a weird name but it was the first thing I thought of.

Polar Explorer by David Grealis
What’s that? Oh it’s only a polar bear. Wait that’s not a polar bear, it’s much bigger than a polar bear. It has thorns on his arms, legs, body and the top of his head. He has giant claws on the tips of his enormous, terrifying looking arms. He has a tongue of thorns that are on fire! I can see that because he just stuck his tongue out. “Guys, look at this” I said to the crew. “Wow, he’s enormous”. His eyes are terrifying me. He’s got feet the size of an elephant. His toes are ferocious. They’re extremely sharp. “Let’s get a closer shot of him”. Wait, what’s he doing now? He’s going down to the water. There’s a herd of walruses down there. He’s taking a huge risk. Walrus are extremely dangerous animals. Wait, he’s picked up about twenty walruses and kills them with one bite. The walrus herd is terrified. They head for the water but the monster has got them. He hits them with his giant thorny arms. All I can see is dead walruses. “Don’t move an inch” I squeak. Also, this beast isn’t just big and strong, he also extremely fast. He caught up with the walrus herd in just two seconds. This creature has to be the most dangerous animal in the world. He’s now swimming over to a huge ship. Uh-oh he just picks the huge ship out of the water and gobbles the people on board. I can hear shouts and screams even though the ship is about thirty metres away. This is some creature! I’m going to call him Megakiller. Wait he’s coming our way. “RUN AS FAST AS YOU CAN!” I shout with incredible fear. Phew, he’s just going over to that herd of seals. As I expected, Megakiller just gobbles them up. This beast is just so majestic, Megakiller, some beast.

Polar Giant by Thomas Nyland
One day, I was in my cabin in the polar regions. I looked out of my window to calculate the weather, then I saw it. A huge nine-foot creature with four arms, each with five, very claw-like fingers as long as your arm! Covered with white fur, it had a black pattern running down one side. It looked very ferocious, so I didn't go outside to look. It's face, hands, feet and chest was pink with cold, as they didn't have any fur. It made a very loud roar; louder than the average lion's. I didn't know what it ate, as I only saw it. It was the most exciting experience in my life!!

Lomponca by Oisin Quinn
I had just climbed up the snowy mountain. To my amazement I had just spotted something spectacular. I wondered if it was an animal or a plant. Let me describe it to you. It was a big green hairy animal. Its fur was brown but the fur had small gaps and through though those little gaps you could see green skin. It had lots of sharp teeth and two tusks. It had four legs its eyes were as black as coal. It looked dangerous and a bit frightening so I decided not to get any closer. I could see it trying to catch penguins and fish so I presumed thats what it eats . Its habitat was an ice pack  about twenty feet away from shore. There was about ten in a group and about four groups. It never seemed to slip so I began to think it had special paws. It could swim very fast so in my opinion I think it has webbed feet. I tried to match it on the internet but it had no match. I had just realised I had just discovered a new species. I decided to name it Lomponca.

The Blubber Pile Monster by Darragh Fahey
I was looking from my telescope when I saw the most peculiar looking thing. I zoomed in on it and did not recognize it. I took a picture of it and looked for a match online. No match. So I went outside and examined it. It was triangular shape with no sharp corners. It's skin colour was blackish grey and it was about 4ft wide and 5ft tall. Then it went up to a seal and walked on it. I could make out there was a seal shape inside it. then the seal just dissolved. It's skin was probably made of blubber. So I decided to call it The Blubber pile monster.

Red Eyes by Jack Ruane McDonald
"As I stumbled out of bed I had such a headache after being up way too late with my friends!" "I seen a mysterious figure emerge from the cold still morning." "He had big black claws, huge big heat the size of a toy cars with a wrigley tail like a snake and the most scary element of this amazing but yet beastly creature was the big bulging red eyes luck for me that I was so tired that I just went back to bed!" "I have told this story many times but nobody ever believes.

Scary Monster by Declan Mortimer
I was in my base in Antarctica. I looked out my window there was very scary animal . He had a wooden foot and a really weird face. He had a body of a bodybuilder. He had bloodshot eyes and had a golden tooth. I went over but he barked at me so I decided to go back to the base because I need to discuss it with the other researchers at the base.  



The task for the paragraph below was to describe how Bella felt when she realised she was in the scary forest all alone:

Bella In The Forest   by Oisin Quinn

I looked up and I realized I was in a dark dense forest. I feel very hungry and thirsty. The weather is frightening. I can hear bears growling, wolves howling and owls hooting. The trees are rustling. I can hear footsteps. I can smell wet and angry bears. I feel extremely guilty that I told my unfortunate grandparents that I would not go into the dark and dense forest. I am very scared that I am lost. I can see huge shadows. I am so scared I can barely shout for help. I am nearly frozen in fear. I am shivering with the cold. Every second feels likes an hour. Will it ever end!

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